Love this, it has a very particular tone to it that is hard to achieve with real authenticity. The only thing I would mention is that I wonder whether street light might be better than lamp as this suggests someone is holding a source of light but its very nit picky of me.

Thought provoking and ethereal while still feeling very real. It felt like the closing lines of each shadow’s fate echoed one another in an eerie, indirect way. Very nicely done.

Structurally very interesting, and feels very autobiographical; a glimpse into someone’s private world. Striking. I like it.

Thanks for all the feedback; Writearound, I like your advice and have updated the story! :)