This rattles along splendidly, before the plug is pulled.
I love the matronly manufacturer, telling off her naughty creation with her motherly safe-phrase “That will be quite enough.” An early bath is clearly in order.
Liked the woman robot ( although does that mean the It in the first paragraph should be ‘She’). Did love the Julie Andrew’s Mary Poppinsesque intervention from the Manufacturer. Also like the last sentence as it sets up a whole set of consequences that the robot has her own override system. An artery of oil or power reads so beautifully.
Good catch writearound! Fixed a ‘she’ and a ‘her’. I picked a female because I wanted to project a smoothness to her motion and form and a badass-ness. :P
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