Ye gods of Ficly, I have but three sets of tags left to finish this cycle. Ripeness is all! I must needs control my rate of narration. Lish me wuck!

Very, very stream-of-consciousness, with that stream being a babbling brook of madness. A bit hard to follow, but that still works for what I believe you are going for here.

THX, thank you, your comment is timely as I’m expecting to try and finish the last 2 entries in this series today, and this points in a suitable direction. I think the narrator’s becoming less and less coherent, so madness seems to be a good objective…

It is the ramblings of a madman – but pleasingly lyrical, nonetheless.