Each section of this story, Eifan will be faced with a choice. It will be your job to comment on which choice he should make. The one that gets the most votes will determine which way the story goes. Clear enough? Good.

Two choices: the room or the corridor. Which does he pick?

The room!

I like all the magical elements coming through strongly and effectively. It makes sense to check out the room. I’m with you that the present tense is generally difficult to manage, but you’re doing an admirable job.

Heh, there was a time when writing in present tense was hard because it was new to me and something I’d never done before. Now I’m completely comfortable with it, almost more-so than writing in past tense. I’m glad you’re enjoying it.

Room. Always clear the area before moving on!

The room.

I am late but I would have said the corridor. The Jimmy corridor.

Boy, you’re kinda stingy with the pencils, aren’t you? Not complaining, just amused. :)

And don’t worry — Eifan will very likely be back to the corridor at some point. And by ‘likely’, I really mean ‘if something in the room doesn’t kill him, gut him, or leave him catatonic first.’