this is very nice. very descriptive. but you should spell “threw” like “through”
cuz threw is like to throw a ball. But good none the less!

OO! good catch! thanks. :)

I love this poem, I can relate, though with the sexes switched.

I think the way to fix the last paragraph is to switch the verb first. “You love me like a sister” to become “You cherish me like a sister” and then “But I love you like a man” to become “But I want you like a lover.” The phrase “to love you like a lover” is so awkward it defies thinking it up.

And yeah, one of the ugly corners of love. It’s kind of odd, love – the more one gives it away, the more valuable that which is given is. To be willing to give of yourself over and over again just is a hallmark of someone with a lot of heart to give. Kudos.