(you said ‘his head" twice in one sentence)
and haha, you could have made the write write a little more.. but its true, entering a challenge doesn’t take the whole box. :)

Yes, the writer typed furiously – but might have wanted to go past “I get an achievement for entering the challenge about getting achievements” as a story. Certainly something the reader would share – but I think I was hoping to go past that into a more general life achievement.

I will accept without personal experience that they pop champagne at Formula One races – but maybe a wedding reception might speak more to a general experience people could connect with?

But still, good solid construction and easily visualizable. One more note – you missed the second e in “sentence”. Not huge, but can throw off some readers.

Thanks for entering the challenge – I look forward to reading more of your work.