Wow, to me this says tough love gone WAY wrong and turned into something corrupted and hateful. What an interesting concept! I hope Vincent’s brother finds his strength to get away from this toxic relationship.

Brutally and unrelentingly dark. Nicely told in a disturbing voice.

Definitely disturbing. I like the ambiguity in terms of Vincent’s age – is he a grumpy old man, reminiscing on his past, or an overly-dramatic young adult?

Actually, there’s a fair bit of ambiguity as to who’s going to die here — Vincent or his brother. Cold, brutal, and chilling, and very well-written.