Should the second line be ‘ignoring’?

Otherwise it’s not bad.

Bleh, I don’t like the last line and I have too many ideas for sequels. Someone please take at least one of those tasks from me.

woah, fast comment. And yes it should be “ignoring” That was a left over from a re-work.

Exciting and scary situation, even if I guessed it was a dream fairly early. Grammar-wise you have a lot of run-on sentences which could use some work.

One of my sequel ideas was to have it as a real place that he goes to while asleep. But there is also more of a psychological route I want to take as well. Thank you for noticing the run-on sentences, I tend to miss things like that.