This was the inspiration: http://www.flickr.com/photos/closetartist/10145651363/in/explore-2013-10-07

A dark fantasy, seen through the eyes of a child. I wonder what it is that she’s trying to imagine her way out of? I like eloquent, well-bred voice, under which Jane could hear the rattle of manacles, think jewels scattered throughout amongst could do with an edit.

Thank you for the feedback, I’ve made the edit.

Cute. I like the character and the feeling of returning to nature by casting off the fetters of social custom and such. Lovely.