Epic, epic, and perfect last line there by Ortho. As ideal a sequel as I could have imagined. Thanks for the sequel, and I really like the quiet characterization of this new fellow.

On purpose?

>“See how he graceful he flies,”

I would suggest not deleting the first he, but:

See how he, how graceful he flies.

I find this eery, that people find angels crashing to earth a common site.

Biblically speaking, it’s happened before, and some of them weren’t treated so well, others were giants that marauded over the lands, and some destroyers of all that’s good.

Reminds me very much of China Mieville.

*its, not it’s. Gets me every time!

My god you’re right – that was a typo in there re ‘how graceful he flies’; how odd, I proofed that a dozen times. Corrected – thanks!