ha, you should write for Criminal Minds :) this is really sick. I like the way it’s all presented, too. Like newspaper excerpts, but not quite.

Thanks Nuclear!

I challenged myself to write a ficly that doubled as a riddle. It then becomes two stories, once the last sentence is read it has to be reread, but with an entirely new perspective.

This is a story about a dog.

Then it doesn’t seem so bad, does it?

(confession, my family actually had a dog like this. Sweet golden lab, but murderous when it came to chickens, cats, rabbits, birds, snakes, rats and even fish…)

haha, right. I totally missed that, I guess the last sentence is still a bit ambiguous, i just thought it was weird at first.

Very good two stories! :D