Oh snap! I like it. It’s good, but i was kind of waiting for a more dramatic way to end it (maybe that would’ve been overdoing it though).. i sort of expected it to end with the start again, like an infinite loop :)

A place we’ve all been to (writers’ block), with a twist at the end. Fun start, in a subdued sort of way.

It’s a refreshingly straightforward bit of story telling, lacking in the stylistic filigree characteristic of many stories on Ficly. And no bad thing for it.