That was epic, and I loved it. It’s a very nice portrait of both the cold reality and this general’s delusional sense of his own awesomeness and role in the world and in the lives of his “wife” and their servants. Great job!

Huge. The mind of a tryant, a heavy subject. It was very strange to see this from the inside.
I liked how the result of his “deeds” seems realisticly complex, or maybe that’s just my understanding.. even though a tryant/mass murderer, his impact on the people might not have been purely negative.
Anyways, good entry, I like it.

(The apostrophe in “betrays me” bothers me for some reason.)