I have very little idea what’s going on, but I like it all the same.

This was just to capture the idea and hold it.. I tried to squeeze in a LOT in a small space. It doesn’t read well as a ficly, but I didn’t want to forget the idea.

It reminds of the game Betrayal at House on the Hill. Your ficly could easily be a very intriguing scenario in the game. My only gripe is the use of the adjective creepy.

Indeed. I hate repetition, but in a hurry, it happens.

What on earth is going on here? It is fizzing with ideas but yes, I can tell that it was written in some haste. Sometimes you just need to get the thing out of your head and down on paper.

Interesting, like the concept of the crown morphing to suit the wearer and the last line was very witty , nothing more silly than a haughty woman with a crown askew and ill fitting ruins the hauteur.