I like it. It’s certainly taken the story in an interesting direction. The vagueness of Jack’s true identity kept me interested, and you did a great job on keeping up the atmosphere.

Thanks. I actually wrote that piece without a sequel or a prequel yesterday. I’ve just been on this site for a couple of days now. I read your piece and thought mine would meld nicely into it, so I just folded Jacks name into the text, and only a couple of things like tense changed, so I deleted my original entry and appended it to this.