Funny, and I love the odd exclamation, which totally keeps with the original characters. Bonus points for looping it back to where it started, even if I didn’t follow completely exactly what happened.

So, Declan died but got lost on the way to the hereafter? And ended up as a talking couch?

Not quite. He died, was given the choice of the afterlife or going back, and was sent back to the wrong world, winding up on Kyle and Jeron’s couch. :-)

well at least they met! The interview of Declan about Death should be interesting..

Haha! I like Death’s little comment at the end.

That did confuse me, but it’s okay because I like “Sweet Larry, brother of Todd!”

I also think it’s great that you cut out all of that middle stuff where the idiots find out about Declan & try to find a way to Ireland. (With these 2, I think they’d walk.)

“Sweet Larry, brother of Todd”— reminded me of The Gospel According to Larry… I am loving this series.

BTW- It’s so good to see everyone back!

I agree with Alexa; it sure shortens things up to have him land in their room. At first I thought it was a little cheap, but the last sentence fixed it.

Hah, great detail on his childhood raising.