It’s a lovely bit of writing with all kinds of meaning to be drawn out of it. I like it.

I’m not entirely sure what is what, but it’s a pleasant read all the same. I liked the line about God taking leave and the narrator being “the man of the world”, which makes for a nice play on words.

Your line about clouds looking like dogs is fantastic. This piece is tightly braided, and full of mystery. I enjoy this piece very much.

Some insight in this fever-dream into a spiritual realm, and yet there is more, an urgency that all dreams have.

Thank you :)