Oooh…. Couple quick typos: “He had first built it along with theMachine” “And the children too were part of the great work” (I think they should be capitalized.) Other than that…wheeee! Now I get to write a scene on the airship! Yay me! :D
Oooh….
Couple quick typos: “He had first built it along with theMachine” “And the children too were part of the great work” (I think they should be capitalized.)
Other than that…wheeee! Now I get to write a scene on the airship! Yay me! :D
Jessica Cahill