For those of you who may not know what a masthead is:

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A magical tale of witchcraft, sexual jealousy…and fish.

This is genius – a perfect sequel, encapsulating and expanding on the atmosphere of my original piece, while filling in a back story that, frankly, I had no conception of when I wrote the original. Thanks!

Great sequel to a great ficly. I’m bothered by just two small things – why you italicised her dialogue, and I’d put a colon rather than a semi-colon in the last sentence.