A friend wrote the prequel after a funny conversation, so I had to join in! Thought i would give a little hint about what she’s really like. Mad obsessions. She was fun to write about :P

Haha! Love it! Especially the last line :D very unsettling tone to her. I kinda don’t want to write from her perspective now in case I ruin it :p. But I do know how to follow on :). Glad you could join in the fun

Brilliant insight into the deranged fantasies of a true obsessive: frozen peas and butter flying everywhere as she presses him up against his van… You’ve taken the opening installment and certainly run with it.

Final line is great, but needs to be past tense for consistency with the preceding (unless this is a deliberate quirk of style)?