Awesome action with a fantasy theme that I like. Spells sent with confidence not affecting the advance of steel – or whatever that black sword is made of. Finally a physical dodge is necessary. The stuff of real D&D!!

Great swords and sorcery stuff – playing to your strengths, I think.

Tense at the end of the final paragraph needs attention: he is cut – he was cut? He cut?

@JonB – You’re absolutely right. Thank you for pointing out that error.

Also, I’m a big fan of this genre, so I’m glad you both enjoyed the read.

I love the voice, definitely a fun scene.