I like this – the description of the lazy sun drooping from the sky is quite lovely, and Fred’s paternal attitude is well observed. And the final line is a nice hook into whatever might follow. I’m also wondering who or what Fred’s companion might turn out to be…

Intriguing start. Feels straight forward but also suggestive of a line. Is Fred a parrot? That’s what I’m thinking.

parrots dont ask questions…

this is just good stuff

They do if you teach them to…