Erm… The parody of the song came up and the last line seemed to suit the story. It amused me so I wrote it and hopefully it won’t ruin the tone of the story.

Also, during the course of writing the song, I decided the Main Character should be called Steve… Better late than never I suppose :P

I think this works fine and the very blokes-in-a-warehouse tone fits with the rest of the story. A bit of light relief, I suppose: I assume the next installment will be darker…