Ooo so there are more? I’d love to read more of these little vignettes! We may not know anything about these characters, but that doesn’t take away from the weight of the situation at all, and in addition the characterization that is achieved in such a small space is really powerful.
Very dark with tons of questions, but I like the moment here, this very twisted take on power and mortality. Nicely told and effectively ‘in the moment’.
I like the disjointed sense of time here: slowing down in the intense moment shared by the two characters, while the world rushes on outside. Very effectively done.