>Each line is an assembly of grains that look more like a kindergarten class awaiting lunch This is great. Do you think you would’ve been able to come up with this imagery if not for the challenge? It’s an amazing and unique description.
>Each line is an assembly of grains that look more like a kindergarten class awaiting lunch
This is great. Do you think you would’ve been able to come up with this imagery if not for the challenge? It’s an amazing and unique description.
@32^2 I really enjoyed the challenge. I like to write in images, using analogies when I can. I liked thinking “small” because so much that surrounds us is about big ideas and concepts.
A vibrant journey through organic imagery. Very well done.
The middle comes across as a bit too pedagogical for my tastes – but the last paragraph is lovely, and more than makes up for it.
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