This is shouting Alice. Sounds like a nice place, but there is always a concern when a room is meant to be full if people and is not. Paragraph 3, line 1. You’re missing something, possibly a noun referring to the room. Glad to know our House has not been completely abandoned.
This is shouting Alice. Sounds like a nice place, but there is always a concern when a room is meant to be full if people and is not.
Paragraph 3, line 1. You’re missing something, possibly a noun referring to the room.
Glad to know our House has not been completely abandoned.
Thanks! Patched but not fixed until I figure out what I want to go there.
You used fluffy twice in quick succession but otherwise wonderful imagery! Do not eat that croissants!!
You used fluffy twice in quick succession but otherwise wonderful imagery!
Do not eat that croissants!!
Alone, this piece does have a Wonderland feel to it. After catching up with the first piece, though, I’m getting more of a Spirited Away mixed with Silent Hill feel. Very interesting read.
Alone, this piece does have a Wonderland feel to it. After catching up with the first piece, though, I’m getting more of a Spirited Away mixed with Silent Hill feel.
Very interesting read.
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