Nice transitions August. After all these segments, we are really picking up speed with the Bete Noir. Oh and tying Noir into the story directly is amazing…

Hmm Maryanne is just sitting alone..oh no!

Haha, hilarious. I wish I’d been more on top of things to see ‘in real time’ my little addition to the story being dragged into things.

This one reads quick and has a fitting sense of urgency to it. Fun stuff, and I like the possibility but not the full assurance that Maryanne is being truthful.