This is both beautifully expressed and beautifully concise; I like it a lot.
amazing work!
Thank you all for your wonderful feedback. I only started writing recently so it really helps get these comments.
Interesting. I wasn’t quite sure what to do with the conflict between an acute and absolute landing versus the wandering and wondering. Still works though—just made me think.
JonB
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