Okay, that should be enough for now… Sorry for cluttering most recent list

Of course Oy would be writing Dark Tower fic. ;)

Interesting story, interesting combination – I’ve only read book 1 of Artemis Fowl, but all the Dark Tower ones.

My main critique will sound funny given this is ficly, but… slow down, take your time. Given how long the story is get into a bit more description of characters & story info. Not everyone knows all these characters or the lingo (ka-tet, todash, etc.) You’ve got a lot of dialogue, but don’t be afraid to slow it down with some description.

Just out of curiosity. I thought fanfic was a bit of a no go according to the community standards?

I remembered after I posted in the challenge but there’s no way to really delete

Why not change it to an original series?
That would make it so you don’t have alot of empty stories.