Very brave use of the format and space for an interesting effect. I feel like I’ll fall, but I like it.

Fascinating. I had to read it several times before I understood what is happening here.

Excellent use of the format – I love the way it literally drags you up and then lets you fall down the page. One of the most original things I’ve seen on here for a good while.

Ty for your lovely entry.

Be advised, I’ve recently discovered that this piece is not formatted correctly when read on a phone. It doesn’t seem to fit on their tiny screens.

I like it. Really interesting structure used to great effect. Thanks for sharing.