Posting here as it seems the most appropriate place in the storyline to put it. I will probably sequel forwards from here, thus creating yet another strand for Pablo to track in his WordPress (sorry!).

oh I like this JonB. Backstory always helps solidify the future moves. Touchpoints for next episodes.

I think you have a ‘where’ that should be a ‘were’ in the second or third sentence. A fun read, especially if you do it in that 30’s radio announcer voice.

So there is THX – corrected. Thanks for spotting.