Beautiful, and romantic, and poetic. Particularly paragraph 4, but really, all of it.

Not only is the writing very strong, but it has a lovely, self-contained coherence to it that, in my opinion, is partially lacking in the other challenge entries that I’ve read so far. Very well done.

Romantic and exotic, a very nice piece of work. I think I see some violations, tho.

I think 32 toys with us, by presenting such words as ‘tripped’ and still maintaining compliance with the challenge brief. Carefully judged, I think.

Gorgeous.