The future is violent indeed, for those who refuse the embrace of USNE. I wouldn’t be surprised if this sort of operation produced the reverse of the intended effect on their wider opponents.
This is great stuff. Perhaps establish a bit more of his feelings around being hit by enemy fire. This is always a question to a reader or viewer. In the best combat movies I have seen, the icing on the cake is to see the characters embracing a hit or wound to themselves as part of the process.