Good stuff.
Hahaha…I love it.
Good writing, but I would un-bold the action. Yeah, it helps differentiate it from the dialogue, but it’s a little distracting and unnecessary. Anyway, good job putting Death into a mundane situation.
Good writing, but I would un-bold the action. Yeah, it helps differentiate it from the dialogue, but it’s a little distracting and unnecessary.
Anyway, good job putting Death into a mundane situation.