So yeah, sequel, woooooo?

A bit rambling, as introspective monologues are bound to be, but you get your point across clearly enough.

it was one of the only dreams I’ve remembered in a long time. That leads to evidence of her existence is an interesting positivist stance.

Let’s see you expand this into a real story…

I think this one would be stronger without the last word, but it’s strong either way. Kinda weird, but that’s clearly what you’re aiming for. Nicely done.