This is an intense, closely observed thing. Absorbing, but could with a bit of tightening, and breaking up, to make it more forgiving for the reader. Good stuff though, so let’s see some more of it!
This is an intense, closely observed thing. Absorbing, but could with a bit of tightening, and breaking up, to make it more forgiving for the reader.
Good stuff though, so let’s see some more of it!
JonB