Pancakes are indeed excellent sailing food.

Sort of rambling without ever becoming incoherent. I like the ragged fade-in before you pull focus on your story after the first few sentences, and the intimate feel of this fragmentary piece makes it a very pleasant read.

Thank you for being the first to enter this challenge. Unfortunately I seem to have missed the connection of this piece to the guidelines of the challenge but I can appreciate the effort of giving the reader a glimpse into a child’s mind and the lack of focus that often comes with youth.