Oooo, wonderful tension and technobabble, with steampunk overtones. I’d love to see some sequels to this one.

I like this! :) I had to chuckle at the security eggs, gives it somewhat of a Gondry-esque feel.
This world seems intriguing, I wonder what happens to the cabinet. Is it a war or an uprising?

Sudden and violent interruption. I like the coolness of the protection person. I also like the fact that you’ve gone against stereotype with the gender of the VIP.

That rocked. By the middle I was enjoying it so much I forgot to watch for the words. Very nicely and solidly done.

And……. I fell in love with this. Enough said.

I pretty much agree with the above – the story is great, and carries one along to such an extent that focusing on the challenge brief and spotting those damned words becomes almost impossible. A clever rouse, perhaps.

Anyway, I shall certainly be popping down the shops tomorrow morning for some milk, and half a dozen security eggs (free range, of course).

Be careful – I put a bulk order in last time, and some official-looking men in uniforms took me aside and told me they were being requisitioned.

Didn’t even get my money back.