Clara’s reaction at the end suggests it’ll take Matt a while to make up for this one. Again, some good storytelling – but your tenses are distractingly inconsistent.
Clara’s reaction at the end suggests it’ll take Matt a while to make up for this one.
Again, some good storytelling – but your tenses are distractingly inconsistent.
Oh, I see it! Alright, I’ll try to keep it more consistent. Thank you!
Lovely moment and looks like JonB already mentioned the tenses thing.
JonB
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