The description of the hare’s eyes as “fractured amber” is wonderful in so many ways!

Haunting and evocative. I like that the gender of the narrator is not explicitly stated. Has a decided and appropriately tragic feel to it and some beautiful writing.

Aye, good stuff and heavy. I wouldn’t dare sequel it.

A beautiful, poignant moment stolen from apocalypse. Expertly portrayed.

This is amazing, as usual for you Jon

Jon, I’m always so impressed with how your scenes of lovemaking come across so beautifully without even a hint of vulgarity; they’re always poignant but matter of fact and this paradox is so refreshing.

Thanks for the comments everyone – always much appreciated.

Amazing.