Sorry for taking so long, and for the quality, life’s been like nooope, no writing for you. Anyways, this is just to expand. I have no idea what to do next
I’m actually finding the rambling narrative style of this quite engaging – the narrator trying to work through his confusion, to get things straight in his head. Feels like there’s some sort of mystery to explore here.
It feels rambling, but that works for the content and the idea that the narrator is hastily recording this.
Hmm, let’s see, we have a dual-natured room, presents, and conflict. Definitely a theme of contradiction and being stuck between competing priorities or goals here. Lots of possibilities around “beats” headphones (assault, noise, feeling assailed or attacked), which is certainly mirrored by the boss’ yelling.