Isn’t that title a Weezer song? I could be mistaken.

An endearing portrait of a commuter’s crush. The end of the first paragraph got a bit hard to follow—almost seemed like there was another individual, maybe even a fourth.

Sorry about that. I got the urge to write this down and was more interested in getting it in writing before I forgot. Not sure on the title, it was just something I thought to myself at the time.

I second THX0477’s comment about the first paragraph, but the piece comes strongly across nonetheless. Two threads captured in the flow of time used to imply a wider tapestry of brief encounters.

Well done.

Slightly depressing, in its portrayal of someone dissatisfied with their life and living off memories of encounters with strangers, viewed from afar.

Nicely written, if a little unfocused; almost feels like you have too many ideas crammed into there. Still a good read though.