Not at all, Pablo – a fine installment, and appreciated since this is one of those stories cobbled together out of chewing-gum and string with no particular aim in mind other than to get the damned thing out of my head.
You’re bang on period (Vitaphone – perfect!) and in character as far as West goes. I imagine that automatic writing will be involved at some point (it usually is).
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