A fascinating snippet of oral history from one of those who just happened to be there. I really like the matter-of-fact, retrospective tone and the structure of this. And a nice bit of theological embroidery as well.

Original and intriguing.

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Oh wow. I absolutely loved this. Very original and weird.

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Hey, welcome back! I haven’t seen you for a while.

I’ve always loved fiction like this (different takes on biblical stories, etc).

This is one of the best I’ve read. Excellent job!

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A bizarre mythology, but I really like the tone. It’s easy to imagine this unimpressed angel lounging unceremoniously and gesticulating in lazy fashion along with her little narrative.

Such great imagery and a rare glimpse of admiration for this usually maligned angel who appreciates his equally detested weavers! Poor spiders…