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That first verse has a great feel to it. Reminds me of Porphyria’s Lover a little.

An enchanting, fairytale feel to it – starts off in bright, sunny spring and ends up in melancholy autumn. Nicely done.

Thanks guys! I’m glad you enjoyed it :)

This piece lends depth to the topic of the challenge while staying away from the negativity that often seems to inevitably follow the idea of an ending. A truly wonderful entry.

Also, welcome to ficly fellow poet!