I didn’t do it!

Oh. Um…never mind. Good story!

i love toast it is crunchy and a good place to keep jam. I am such a fan of toast that i have always wanted to get an airstream trailer be cause it looks like a toaster. Hey did you know that in a survey eighty percent of the people asked said toast goes in a toaster(bread). oh by the way the story was really good it transports the reader through a full gambit of emotions, while still finding time to develop the main character, and in a very short time we get to see her BECOME. I loved it.

This had a “Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind” vibe for me. It makes me wonder that if somehow that moldy little bit of toast comes to light whether her memories will come back.

I don’t know that the word “personally” is necessary. I’d cut it to save you some characters, but it looks like you were well within limits.

Nice challenge entry.

I echo the Eternal Sunshine comment . It’s a very simple story, with a surprising emotional punch considering how amusing the concept could be.

I really like it.

Well done within the constraints of the challenge. I like the idea of the moldy toast, waiting patiently (fallaciously pathetically, too) to spring on the heroine, and infect her with the unwanted memories…

thanks for all the comments guys!! :)

I loved it. ’nuff said

Thank you sooooo much for your participation in my challenge! it was great. :P I LOVE TOAST!

I loved this story! It was a nice beginning to her challenge