Great story! The dialogue and visualization conveyed a lot and it made me feel for these students facing tough times. The only place of improvement that I can spot is the “but still rather pleasant” bit. It’s a small hiccup on the overall flow of the story.
Great story! The dialogue and visualization conveyed a lot and it made me feel for these students facing tough times.
The only place of improvement that I can spot is the “but still rather pleasant” bit. It’s a small hiccup on the overall flow of the story.
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