Oh, that was depressing. Well done on depicting the aftermath of every new parent’s worst nightmare. Seriously, after my first kid was born, I had a nightmare about dropping a baby and having its head crack like an egg.

Wow, this is really effective. I really appreciate the unique take on the challenge and the matter of fact tone of loss. Really good work.

Very powerful – the sense of emptiness is palpable.

The sadness, and emptiness is there, but also regret and a sense of failure.