Tense moment. I like jump-gates and your description of its operation is very cool.

Slick, smooth sci-fi action stuff. You tell a good story, as ever.

Bizarre and eerie, but I like it. Even though I’m way behind on following this epic series it’s still easy to visualize.

Although I was expecting the sequel to involve a step to the right.

feels like a passage to a sci-fi epic! I hope so, at least. You caught my attention!