Cold and harrowing without really saying much in the way of describing the scene as frankly wrong. Some tense changes or typos towards the beginning but otherwise feels right for the subject matter in terms of style and directness.

Feels quite deliberately unpleasant. There is an overall issue of consent that is hinted at, but not directly addressed in this – which leaves it open to different interpretations. Pretty effective overall.

(also a handful of minor grammatical issues which THX mentions – slightly distracting but nothing too serious).